SSStrange CCclouds: Part Two: The
Stranger
Last Chapter review: I’m amazed that I was able to turn a
guy who woke up in a desert, got up and walked away, into a whole page! This
part might be more robust and you know, has more plots.
Now:
Steve Lipchitz had watched the bright stars turn to sepia
and reveal the golden diamond tinted sands around him. Just like the deserts on
earth, the two giant interlinking suns way up in the sky and beat down harshly.
Enough sweat was ripping out of Steve’s forehead to fill an entire water
bottle. What seemed like a boat in a sea of lucky stars seemed like riding a
dingy to hell. He was beginning to turn weak, he then fell down a large sand
dune and landed face first on the bottom, the tie he had wrapped around his
head to protect his eyes had come off.
Blea!
Steve spat out the sand, still tasted like earth.
It had been a whole ten hours since Steve had first woken
up in the desert. He had not seen anyone or anything, until now. A speckle of
silver glimpsed in the distance. Steve adjusted his glasses; it was moving. He
got back up and ran as fast as his legs would let him.
“Hey!” Steve shouted. The Silver thing looked at him; it
was a man moving something.
“Hey, wait up!” Steve replied. Suddenly, the Silver man
sudden pointing some sort of long metal rod at him, the last thing Steve saw
was himself being thrown back with a chunk of his right shoulder blowing up
before being sent into eternal darkness…
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